The How-to Of Creative Writing - Joining Up The Dots

Posted at 10:35am on 13th September 2008


How did you get on with the last session? I hope the update on all the previous tutorials was a help. For those of you who’ve just joined, the post titled The How-to of Creative Writing – What Makes A Story A Plot? – will link you to all relevant sessions.


In the last post, I stressed the importance of conflict in plotting a story. That is as true of an inspirational true-life story or testimony as it is for a novel. We looked at E.M.Forster’s definition of the difference between a story and a plot, given in a series of lectures titled, Aspects of the Novel, in 1927.

  • a story is a narrative of events arranged in their time sequence .
  • ‘The king died and then the queen died’ is a story.
  • a story can only have one merit: that of making the audience want to know what happens next.
  • a plot is also a narrative of events - the emphasis falling on causality.
  • ‘The king died, and then the queen died of grief’ is a plot.
  • The time-sequence is preserved, but the sense of causality overshadows it.


But that still doesn’t tell us much about the process of plotting


How would you go about plotting a story? Many beginning writers think of the process in a linear fashion, a flat line beginning at the beginning, and finishing at the end. The time sequence is all important in their eyes.

I want to show you a different way of looking at plotting. In the last session I wrote about Compass Points and joining up the dots. We have also discovered, over the past few weeks, that:

  • Theme is the purpose of the journey which, like a railroad, keeps you on track.
  • Characters are the drivers, not merely travellers.
  • Story is the vehicle.
  • Plot is the journey itself.

Can you see a thread emerging? A thread which suggests that plotting a story is a process of travelling – metaphorically speaking. A moving from one point to another. It’s like planning a journey by plotting points on a map.

At this point (in time!) you probably feel that it raises more questions than answers – and I don’t want to overload you. So let’s separate each strand of the thread and look at it in more detail.

  • If Plotting is a process of getting from one place (the beginning of your story) to another (the end), how do we go about it?
  • Crucially, all of the elements above are involved in that process – what does that mean?
  • Far from being a flat line, the journey will be rising and falling – why should that be so?
  • We need to establish the departure point and destination – when should my story begin and end?

In the next session, we’ll look at the answers to those questions.


Make a time-line for your story. That’s a simple flat line with a time sequence for each event.


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We’ll take a look at that timeline, and see how it compares to a short story that’s been around for a few thousand years. Then I’ll show you the plot.

© Mel Menzies, September 2008

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